He’d been getting ready for work when Sarah stopped by and she caught him freshly cleaned. When she pulled in to kiss him he hoped she’d notice his new perfume. Techie had gotten it just for her! “I l-love you too, Sarah,” he sighed dreamily and enjoyed her feather-light kisses.
Author: techiehux
“You’re my whole world techie, you make me so happy” she blushed as well and gave him a sweet kiss to his lips. “Good night my sweetheart. I love you” she cuddled him as close as possible, his heart beat lulling her to sleep.
Techie wriggled happily against her from pure joy. He kissed her back and threaded his fingers through her hair, watching her sleep with a lovestruck, dopey look on his face. He couldn’t think of anywhere else he’d rather be.
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✎ : your vocabulary tends to be bland / repetitive / basic && you should take small steps in introducing more complex words!
✏ : your vocabulary is WAY too complex ; tone down a little so i can understand what you write
✘ : your characterization is a little off ; it varies from canon in a way that isn’t too great
♥ : your romantic threads are awkward && need a little improvement
ღ : you’re too harsh on yourself ; i actually like you writing a lot
♒ : needs more figurative language ; you tend to state things directly && that makes it bland
❃ : your punctuation / grammar / spelling needs improvement ( exclude any if not relevant )
∞ : you should develop your AU ideas more
☄ : your dialogue is ( boring / repetitive / non-canonical ) && needs to be improved on
❖ : you aren’t respectful to your RP partners / followers
✿ : your character is too perfect ; everyone needs SOME flaws
☂ : you focus TOO MUCH on ( smut / angst / romance ) && I would really love to see you write ( insert genre )
๑ : your writing tends to drag on with unimportant details / you tend to write too much about one particular thing
✄ : you need to improve on ( insert genre ie action / angst ) by ( …insert criticism )
☼ : try to have confidence in yourself ; sometimes your hesitance holds you back
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A flash of red caught his eye. There weren’t that many red-heads around after all. “Hux! We need to discuss–” his vocoder voice cut off mid sentence as he finally got a decent look at the man. It wasn’t the General, but… “How…? Who are you?” he demanded. -kylocanyounot
Techie froze and felt ice run through his veins. Why is Kylo Ren, of all people, talking to him?! The blood is pulsing so hard in his ears that he doesn’t even know what the man is saying, and can only stare blankly at him.
“Um, ah,” he says, very intelligently.
And then bolts for the nearest exit.
“Do you know anybody else n-named Kylo? And you d-do deserve this,” Techie said with confidence. He took Ren’s large hand gently and led him towards the back of the room.
“Hold out your hands and c-cl-close your eyes,” he coaxed, taking a tiny box from behind the cake and placing it into his hands. “Open it!”
I love the comic because it suggests that Techie made the wire trees not just because he enjoyed twisting wire, but because he desperately loved nature and had never seen a real tree.
I feel like most of my life choices can be summed up with this gif:
A flash of red caught his eye. There weren’t that many red-heads around after all. “Hux! We need to discuss–” his vocoder voice cut off mid sentence as he finally got a decent look at the man. It wasn’t the General, but… “How…? Who are you?” he demanded. -kylocanyounot
Techie froze and felt ice run through his veins. Why is Kylo Ren, of all people, talking to him?! The blood is pulsing so hard in his ears that he doesn’t even know what the man is saying, and can only stare blankly at him.
“Um, ah,” he says, very intelligently.
And then bolts for the nearest exit.
Techie hurriedly flips on the lights and points towards the room with a grand, sweeping gesture. “Happy Kylo Day!”
Red and white balloons all over the place, a black layer cake with candles arranged in the shape of a smiley face, and decorative wire figures of animals (some of them not recognizable, to be honest) meet Ren’s eyes. There’s a scented candle somewhere in all the decorations that makes the room smell of peppermint.
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